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Audience Feedback

Most Recent Draft of the Newspaper

Updated Newspaper

Adding to the Newspaper Advert

Changes to Newspaper Advert

Advertisement Feedback

Feedback:

• The first advert is too dark and is difficult to look at, the second advert is a better colour, however it doesn't clearly relate to Christmas
• Change the colours of the writing and background so they all relate to Christmas due to it being a Christmas advert
• Insert a product image that the company sells
• The '20%' could be brought down slightly
• Add a small print along the bottom to emphasise clear dates

Changes to 'Other Headlines'

After attempting this section with a grey box and black text, I changed the colour of the text to see if it would look more professional in white text. I will get feedback on both of these to decide which one suits the newspaper best.

Changes to 'Other Headlines'

I have experimented with the 'other headlines' section and have included a grey box to put the text in.
The intention is to get feedback on this as to whether the box itself works as well as the colour.

Advertisement - Colour Changes

Advertisement Trial

Possible Changes to 'Other Headlines'

This newspaper has an 'inside' section to the newspaper and we may consider changing our 'other headlines' section to something similar as this looks slightly more professional to what we originally have, therefore we may apply this to our own.

Possible Changes to 'Other Headlines'

We are considering changing our 'other headlines' section to something like the strip line along the side that is in yellow as we were unable to find the original newspaper we took inspiration from and, therefore we found that the section of the newspaper didn't look professional enough, hence our decision to change it.

Newspaper Second Draft