Feedback:
- The first advert is too dark and is difficult to look at, the second advert is a better colour, however it doesn't clearly relate to Christmas
- Change the colours of the writing and background so they all relate to Christmas due to it being a Christmas advert
- Insert a product image that the company sells
- The '20%' could be brought down slightly
- Add a small print along the bottom to emphasise clear dates
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